Saturday, June 6, 2009

Vortex

When will you break the silence?
Let go of this
You are far from reality
It’s not worth the pain

Sucked into this vortex
A reel of misery, endless nights
Sucked into this vortex
Desperately digging a way out
You are one step closer

Since you are no longer ignored
Alone on this land
Fighting the flames, and failed
Truly a loss, scattering deep
End of a black world
Words piercing like serrated blades
A sharper day altogether
And then you’re one step closer

Another step closer to somewhere

The desert storm thunders across our land
Echoes through the darkest alleys
I can still see all the lovers of me
I still know those feelings
But I have chosen to forget
Won’t you look at me one last time
When I’m only watching you suffer?
Feel the pain..

[Interlude – Solo]

[Clean Singing/Whispers]
You’re one step closer (..to somewhere)
I’m one step closer (..to somewhere)
You and I are one step closer to nowhere.

- Words & Music by AJ.

PS :- This song isn't written for anyone else other than me. The only picture I had in mind while writing it was a man suffering in the desert storm.

9 comments:

Agnes~ said...

That's actually very well written.
I love the imagery.

leyawn said...

Thanks. Coming from you at this point, that's a lot :P

Agnes~ said...

Haha. Shutup =P

Srushti said...

I like this, very very much!
It's amazing <3

leyawn said...

kakakka, weird you like such genre of writing. but thank you :D

Anonymous said...

:)

leyawn said...

haha, i know what that is hinting at ;)

Anonymous said...

<3

leyawn said...

where do all these anonymous posters come from ? :S